Mary_Tapia

Sorry author but You need to strengthen the plot and spice ot up a bit if you want to pick up the audiencE interest. you csn do it id you you out your mind to it. concentrate on the main characters and finally add some positive interactions between them. too much drama weakens the plot and discourages the audience.

I love the plot and Everything about it. however , the author was working on multiple novels at the same time and this one suffered. KazZenlx ( the auThor) just fInished Hellbound with You. Hopefully he’ll listen to his followers whom have been patiently waiting, and will start working on this one again.:)

I see comments from 2 yeArs ago and get disappointed and Scared to spend time Reading when the author obviously is not Interested or vEsted in the story. 2 years is a long time to be in such early stages and not Closed to beiNg finished :( I dont want to sadted my time ir be checking all the time for updates. I Like rhe story BUt rather choose completed sTories or go for AuthOrs that update frequently . Other than that so far the story is good

Loved it. Very nice and different from the other where the the pikr lead characters go through exaggerated suffering. This novel is Opposite and I couldn’t pIt it down. To the author , please keep up Your good work