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  • Golden_Prick
    Golden_Prick4 years ago
    Replied to Revamping12345

    definetly you

  • Golden_Prick
    Golden_Prick4 years ago
    Replied to Revamping12345

    thats what you said about zoro in marvel

  • Golden_Prick
    Golden_Prick4 years ago
    Posted

    Been reading gil's works, each is kinda dumb but unique in their own way, but this one surpassed them all, its only the first chapter but I'm excited to see more, you better not drop this half way like you did to... all you're novels

  • Golden_Prick
    Golden_Prick4 years ago
    Posted

    This is a great book and it portrays the author's creativity and talent. I like how the chapters blend together. The story is just wonderfully.

  • Golden_Prick
    Golden_Prick4 years ago
    Commented

    Pretty good start. Excellent quality, i read your other works, so I follow your books, as expected nothing less than amazing. Oh and ur right, there haven't been a lot of zero fanfics, better do my son some justice

  • Golden_Prick
    Golden_Prick4 years ago
    Posted

    Very interesting power fantasy going on here, but the prose and structure of the words are easy to get lost in. There are a lot of things being described in the past tense, that make scenes play out very statically. Also some of the paragraphs should be broken up or spaced differently when switching perspectives between scenes. All in all a captivating story with a few errors in the quality of writing.

  • Golden_Prick
    Golden_Prick4 years ago
    Posted

    Author you got a nice book. Make sure to keep going I'm gonna keep it in my library and wait till it gets a lot of chaps so I can bench read this.

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  • Golden_Prick
    Golden_Prick4 years ago
    Posted

    I think i rating got deleted so i will make my review again.This is an interesting book. The concept itself is kinda similar to mythological genes but it's impressive the author-sama is 13. And daaaaaam 6 chaps in 3 hours. tho the chaps are kinda short its still impressive tho I hope he increases the word count

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  • Golden_Prick
    Golden_Prick4 years ago
    Commented

    Not bad not bad

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  • Golden_Prick
    Golden_Prick4 years ago
    Replied to OldManMarcus

    exatcly u frickin perv

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