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Omg, after reading I totally have an idea! I'm a previous chapter, you transcribed that a burst of red energy came out of her,ever since I've read that, I can see in the back of my mind that her beast is a pheonix, I can totally see it getting angry because of the stupid parasite. I mean c'mon it is a pheonix! How dare a parasite stop it from burning bright. I think she should meet it in a dream and then one day she tries to bring it out and the parasite retaliates,then the Phoenix gets angry and she bursts into flames and burns the parasite out of her face while healing herself becoming even more beautiful. Her beast should fly out of her body and make a loud cry twice before going back in and she.should no longer be on fire and then gracefully faint into the arms of when xaio
omg is she going to be okay?
omg what the hell?
Book could use a lot of work. Nevertheless it is a work in progess. I look forward to the authors maturity in developing this story. This story is not bad but could use a lot of work. We the readers need to know more about the characters and their attitudes. We also need to know what they look like. Also what is Amber's backstory.