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i was also wondering the same thing aaah,
not hating just expressing since we are the ones reading it if not we wouldn't care but it was posted and needs comments even if they might be negative ones but still comments next time should improve
first of this is a great novel, you have made this novel interesting but too much future information is making the novel hard to read after knowing where he will end up with his powers, if it's like that how about making it short and not too long but interesting in every chapter so one reads it repeatedly and be satisfied rather make more chapters and bore the reader, but all in all this is a great novel i love the different system of power it's refreshing seeing and reading something new unlike all these other repetitive novels, don't drop it keep it up đđ„you deserve all the stars but it's to motivate you đ