Zhang Fei: He is different from Ling Yun, who was innocent and dependent on Ling Xi at the beginning of the story. He is decisive from the beginning, maybe because he is a demon. Zhang Fei: He is also different from Chen Li, who often hesitates in making decisions and often takes time to solve problems at the beginning of the story. Zhang Fei: He is more similar to Xia Tian, who doesn't depend on others, but he also doesn't hesitate to ask for help if he encounters difficulties. Zhang Fei: He is caring and affectionate towards those closest to him. He is decisive in making decisions, but he always acts with caution and careful calculation. He was extremely cruel and merciless, and he even dared to kill his big brother, who tried to kill him first. He is cunning and does not hesitate to take advantage of anyone who can benefit him and those closest to him, both men and women.

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So far the progress is not bad, the pace is slow, and you have to build a good and realistic relationship between him and his harem. I hope you don't rewrite this novel for the fourth time. Good luck...

To be honest, it would be best if you used their past stories as side story later.

This Dali surely an idiot!

Can you mention which novels that he plagiarized? 🤔

Although the growth of his harem is still a bit too fast. At least, the women have their own back stories. Overall, this rewrite is much better than the original version.

So far the plot and pace are pretty good, I hope the story isn't rushed like in the old novel. If possible, make the MC's relationship with the current woman deeper first, before bringing up a new harem member.

In my opinion, you're just commenting from your point of view, but you don't understand the whole point. Try to reread it, the one who sent the assassin was not Ye Hang or Ye Clan, but Zhao Yun's mother. Why would they send assassins to the Ye Clan, if Ye Hang didn't go overboard? Moreover, in the next chapter, Zhang Fei already beat Ye Hang by himself. (With your opinion as such, and also your comment 'Why doesn't she just beat him up'. In my opinion, despite it being true or not, it clearly shows that you are very inclined to violence.) Active woman? You've made a big mistake, if you want all women to have the same character, that means you don't understand women at all. Some women are docile, some are timid, some are always passive, and some can be aggressive and violent. Like I said before, even though they are cultivators, women are still women, and you can't generalize to them. (Even men have different characters, some men are dashing, some are brave, some are cowards, some like to brag.)