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Good beginning to a story, but needs more context.
This chapter was good, and the story has been going great, but I think it would be more entertaining if you focused more attention on the story's harem aspects, and see him and jean become strong together! Also another plot that would be cool, would be if we see Jean and Bruce separate so they can concentrate on training. Bruce would continue to train his normal way, while Jean would be trained by the X men. Once they meet up again to see each other, Cyclopes gets jealous of Bruce and the 2 start too fight!!