Ahh true to his name cornbringer bring us the most corny edge story that rival 11 year old wet dream with zero creativity and nonsense progression. The amount of cringe in this story especially the first 9 chapter is really too much. I just hope the one who wrote this is a juvenile person and not a full grown adult.

Story with good premise but brought down by lazy writing, awful development and uninteresting 1 dimensional cast of character. Seriously every character is just cardboardkun #1 , #2 and so on

You know when the author just keep dragging the story with useless side quest. Didn't help the mc is really just a whiny bitch who keep bitching but didn't do anything type of person. Mc got a cheat item that the author blatantly stole the idea from the other cyberpunk fic but do nothing to his body while talking about revenge for killing everyone close to him. Earlier chapter he talk about being don't care about anything happened to him as long he find his sister and getting revenge but getting scared when the nanite trying to improve his body because "thats not him anymore"

Sigh...another whiny mc that only knows to brag in his monologue and do nothing. All of the story progression because of other people instead of mc

Strong world background.. Too bad the mc is kinda a little bitch with the emotional maturity of 12 year old emo boy with victim complex..Got reincarnated into a world that have magic system or shit and instead of doing research of the world and may ultimately identified which world he reincarnated to earlier, he done nothing but getting bullied and being behind the studies for 10 years..reminder this is a reincarnated man. After he got power, he wants to get into the same school as the game mc but wants to avoid the mc and his group? What kind motivation is that?

Good concept trash execution... nonsensical decision.. In conclusion, a wasted potential fic because of the subpar iq of the author.............

Just f her bro