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Anthony_Galloway1yrPostedOK, I read a piece of it (1,2 chapter), and I got to say, I like it so far, I'm not really into romance but this one gets an exception because of how well it was written, you definitely have some impressive writing technique. This reminded me of the writing of an author named Gary Paulson creator of The Hatchet book, Kudos to. you. (I really read it, I liked it too, and I am definitely going to keep reading it.)
- Anthony_Galloway2yrPosted
I just started reading and so far the only chapter I've read is good. I gave attention to the quality of writing. I can tell the development is going to be good by not only the chapter but the tags as well. World background was obvious, this is most likely an isekai type dilemma. But so far I like it. (BTW, I actually read the novel)
- Anthony_Galloway2yrPosted
OK, first I found this on the forums but it actually has something to it I like the way the stories system works from mana, Souls, Skills, and gods/goddesses. I have no problem giving it a perfect rating, I just love the way the author laid it out and even gave some nice information pertaining to the story. Kudos to you!!
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Once the night had fallen the moon was full and the party was going on, music, dancing, drinking, drugs, and there was blood not just any blood they brought live drugged humans to the party. I tried to conceal myself because if I had any human blood I wouldn't be able to stop. No vampire has the will to stop not even the famous Dracula from the tales. As the warm human blood dropped everywhere it became evermore hard to fight the temptation but I fought as hard as I could. Gabrial walked to me in a party mood and asked me what my problem was and to just have a little fun. Honestly, I could but if I just got a smudge of loose near blood I would be a real vampire, heartless, ruthless, and careless vampire. I told him about it and his only reaction was to make me dance and I followed his lead and went with the flow and danced a little. Then a human was running, I could hear it and when I turned around the blood-drenched human collapsed on top of me and the blood got on my face and some made it into my mouth. - Anthony_Galloway2yrReplied to The_author21
Oh yeah, this book is on the new tropes list on the front page of the website!!! I was so excited when I found out!
Once the night had fallen the moon was full and the party was going on, music, dancing, drinking, drugs, and there was blood not just any blood they brought live drugged humans to the party. I tried to conceal myself because if I had any human blood I wouldn't be able to stop. No vampire has the will to stop not even the famous Dracula from the tales. As the warm human blood dropped everywhere it became evermore hard to fight the temptation but I fought as hard as I could. Gabrial walked to me in a party mood and asked me what my problem was and to just have a little fun. Honestly, I could but if I just got a smudge of loose near blood I would be a real vampire, heartless, ruthless, and careless vampire. I told him about it and his only reaction was to make me dance and I followed his lead and went with the flow and danced a little. Then a human was running, I could hear it and when I turned around the blood-drenched human collapsed on top of me and the blood got on my face and some made it into my mouth. - Anthony_Galloway2yrCommented
Honestly, I like the descriptive type of way you write it kind of had me here for 30 mins.
Her eyelashes opened slowly showing her browny lovely eyes. There is still sleeping on them but she rubbed them and half a stand looking around her simple old room. She sighs and get up from the bed walking with heavy steps to her small bathroom, she washed up and went to her kitchen opening her old fridge when she found nothing. She looked not bothered and went to change her clothes into a floral pink simple dress that is above her knees with sleeves showing her simple beauty more. Her short brown hair that is on her shoulder, she combed it and took her basket and left - Anthony_Galloway2yrReplied to The_author21Ch 1 A Family Of Vampires
- Anthony_Galloway2yrReplied to ARnab
Thanks, bud!!
"My name is James Duskman I am 16 and I am from Bostic North Carolina and I just moved here not too long ago." I recited aloud, "Excellent James you need to remember this for when we have to move... Just in case someone finds out about our family's secret." My mother said to me with her hands hugging each other while smiling at me.