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    book_2341yr
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    This is being continued on Royal Road........................................................................................................................................................................................

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    book_2342yr
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    I've written this on the phone, don't mind the mistakes pls :)

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    Old self review, it is likely not to be very accurate. Read the other one if you are curious about the book.

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    book_2342yr
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    Alright, this small review is needed for reader that are about to approach the book. You aren't convinced at all by the uninformative synopsis, and even at the cost of minor spoiler want to know more about it. You already now that I'm a newbie author and English is not my main language. However you shouldn't be having many problems in understanding my writing, since many others already read the book. Still beware that the first ten chapters might be tough to read. SPOILERS AHEAD(not much though) Now who exactly is Xeno, he started off as weak being obliged to work hard every day to survive. An incident suddenly happens, death is slowly approaching him. To save his life he will accept an offer from a mysterious being, changing himself completely. Received a new body, Xeno becomes another kind of existence entirely, a more powerful and dangerous one. Yet what he believed to be true strength, will demonstrate to be weakness once again. However he chose not to abandon himself, but to keep believing in his convinctions. From here only the truly evil lies ahead. The ruthlessness necessary to shape everything in his path, for himself and the ones he holds dear. I hope you know have a more clear opinion about what to expect from the book. Disclaimer: Beware 'hold dear' does not mean romance, because he won't consoder anyone in a romantic way.

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    Replied to sparsh_garg

    thank you!

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    thank you!

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    Replied to sparsh_garg

    it will be basically suicide in this kind of society, which to us humans would even seem an ok option. I mean if their condition is worse than death they could as well put an end to it. However the celidrea are not humans, they are generally more cynical than us and would rather work to death than kill themselves.

    "Indeed, Ilenia is under the care of a [hunter]. But what if she has no talent like us. She will have to work here or even worse in a brothel." Sadness, anger, injustice were the feelings attached to his words.
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    book_2342yr
    Replied to sparsh_garg

    it will be explained later on

    If one of them holds a grudge against you, being on the cautious side is the right choice.
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    Replied to sparsh_garg

    thank you!

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    it is quite a flexible part so it doesn't hinder his movements that much. However it is quite the weak spot to hit, as it is part of his nervous system. It is basically a power up for his brain!

    His elongated head changed too, as it extended even further down his back until it finally reconnected to his body at the end of his new gained armor.
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    Replied to Vreed_Was_Here

    I know it may sound too strong of an ability but at least in the beginning it has a limit and it also burdens his mind.

    You can turn other beings in a lesser by injecting a part of your reproductive fluids into them. If they accept spontaneously they can just drink the fluids.
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    Replied to Vreed_Was_Here

    Tecnically no, as monsters are considered creatures that act out of pure instinct. Xeno is an intelligent being.

    To get an actual occupation. I was thinking about something like a [Hunter] to kill monster. From hunting the I could get what I needed right now.
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    to his arms until his first evolution. They are not very thick in volume yet quite durable even more if charged with energy.

    Then I stopped, and unwrapped my rainbow coloured tendrils.
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    Replied to Bee_n_Jackal

    i do not want to spoiler anything but it is true that Vix will be a peculiar character, not the usual obidient and dull servant of Xeno.

    Ch 30 [Chapter 30 – No.5]
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    Replied to Bee_n_Jackal

    Xeno's race is not a Xenomorph but rather a more advanced species that comes from it. Although his servants called 'lessers' are basically Xenomorphs. You can think it like Azoths as the leaders/generals and the lessers as the basic soldiers of an army. In my mind it made sense, anyway the story is mix between fantasy and sci-fi.

    Ch 7 [Chapter 7 – Not so kind anymore]
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    book_2342yr
    Replied to Red_baron

    no bonus chap sorry, I'll post one maybe tomorrow

    Ch 46 [Chapter 46 – Hidden Danger – Part 2]
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    Replied to Renegade_cultist

    thank you, we'll have a big fight in the next one!

    Ch 45 [Chapter 45 – Hidden Danger – Part 1]
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    book_2342yr
    Replied to Renegade_cultist

    Thank you, I will resume the novel if there is someone willing to read it [img=recommend]

    Ch 44 [Chapter 44 – A new world – Part 3]
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    You can turn other beings in a lesser by injecting a part of your reproductive fluids into them. If they accept spontaneously they can just drink the fluids.
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    book_2343yr
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    *Cough* It has nothing to do with romance!! As I said in the tag, MC will not develope any kind of romantic feeling!!

    "Wait Xeno! don't eat her. She will be better as a lesser trust me. There aren't many like her, you'll make a capable servant out of her."
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