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Chang to “slightly bowing his head”
Reassembled means “to put back together”, you should change it to resembled.
Call -> recall
Question -> quest
Seriously I am absolutely tired of seeing this awful gif
“Transverse” should be changed to “traverse”
Yeah they shouldn’t know his real name
Matter -> mind
I was hoping for the doctor to be the love interest
Answer -> ask
As soon -> and soon
Over his sword -> over his shoulder
Basal -> basic
“Victor of the best” should be “victor of the bet”
This is an awkwardly phrased joke if it was a joke at all it just seems so forced like the author wants the Mc to be funny to the other characters but doesn’t know how to