Dwain_7721

Everytime I buy privileged chapters the author go on vacation or end the updates... They need to update their refund policy

I cant wait for the day I get to read when Nephis remembers everything. I feel like she will become Sacred just off the memories lol

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Rein gonna bag Hela.... I feel it lol

I love him and Hela's relationship lol. They should end up together after all this

He should have chosen Vadlia

That makes sense. I understand not making the system OP and exploring the intricacies in boxing, but their is little interaction between him and the system. Playing down the fact that he has a supercomputer power that can break down styles, help with training, read body language, Health and mental statuses,and give him almost precognition hurts the story. I like how bold your being with this angle and I agree. It reminds me of the anime Kenichi Mightiest disciple... I just feel like the fact he has a system is significantly downplayed which is hurting the story. It can be grounded and imaginative at the same time.

I don't understand why he gets so easily frustrated and manipulated even though he suppose to be a grown man in a young body. The second is the system doesn't really give him much of an edge. No status windows, physical improvements, updates... its like it's just there for training and pattern recognition. I feel like these two things are regressing the story and holds back the potential of the fantasy aspect.

Dragon Vein Wizard!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The story is different and was interesting, it's just whoever is in charge of editing and proof reading stopped doing their job at around like ch.300. Half of the chapters are just repeated paragraphs from previous chapters. Couldn't really get past it.