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Liiza about to make an impact on Khan's life? What happens next? What is his goal that made him see other people as product now? What happens when other recruit get Aduns? Would there be people trailing him? Or he would gain a respect that would discourage them from doing so?
When he fought with the wolves was there any miracle encounter? And that was his first fight and mission, when he got the storage ring, if you read well the book itself explained he had engaged in several mission before the one that gave him the storage rings. I don't see a point in this criticism. It seema to me like a hate you have seveloy for cultivation books
The fact that you said the mc went from good for nothing to super talented just because he saw a dragon, shows how low your thoughts are, it was not just seeing a dragon, it was seeing a display of power, a chance to be no more a good for nothing. I respect your views but this in particular is absolutely wrong. Lete pick out your wrongs