The author has an interesting way of delivering the story. The author mostly used script. The script and conversation flow are easily understood. It lets the reader relate naturally. The characters seem great and interesting. I look forward to more story development in the next chapters. Way to go! Keep it up. :)

Using great characters: Mathews and Lance as starters was a great start. They are captivating. Describing a character on each chapter is a unique strategy of writing. Way to go author! It was a good read, indeed.