Its nice the begging was slightly boring but beyond that it was good also thank you for making him go solo instead of going with her. Good luck

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Eyyyy I'm back and why fight him their going to lose and when I read that he ait all the consumables I laight that I can imgine like steaks and apples in his mouth also love your have a good day.

I'm back!!!!!Okay so now she is going to get a godly item soon second the ring is going to be a asset and a pain to deal with. Wait I just imagined this scenario imagine he had the ring when he was fighting the 100.000 players imagine he had the ring when he fought his dange whould be in the thousands he whould be one shotting player left and right. Well once again love your work and I hope you continue and have a amazing day.

Okay so they went to the field of the monster of level 100 to like 151 i think and he showed the ring to her and he wore it at a camp site. I have a question since you can remove items like take them from another player by force does that mean somebody can take a helmet boots rings like all of that. I have a amazing thought. Okay so if I knew this I whould give up on all the different stats and focus on my speed I whould be so fast I could rip off all the equipment off a player put it on and of course only the items that are available to be removed from the player so its a interesting thought to think about. Love your work and continue to do your best and have a good day.

Okay interesting I whould say if I was in his position I whould bait the monsters into the building so that I can continuously evolve the weapon while burning the floors so That the goblins can't move as well anymore. For the winged beast I whould use my chain to grab the neck and make it aim downward then kill it a reasonable height and fall down and kill the monsters and evolve my chain. Also with the cape why could the winged beast see him. But the story is good I expect good things from the book.

Okay so the event is going on and Kristen is scared of doing anything and the event is going on. So with double drop also with the daggers and luck status the coins should be dropping left in right while being doubled because of the event. also I wonder about that new scythe that is coming soon Its definitely not going to be good as his scythe now but pretty good also question about the scythe can he weird two at the same time or only one at a time because I can only imagine Trevor welding two scythes and using frenzy while making giant copy of himself and teleporting himself i could only imagine 8 different giants of copy of himself also that ring im hoping something cool will happen well have a good day and continue the hard work and I love your work.

Okay so I just read it now and I got really hooked in but the end with the YOU DONT REMEBER THE PROMISE WHEN WE WERE SEVEN YEARS OLD made me laugh its good ill give it a 4.5 its starts off nice and ended with a bit of stupidity but I like it continue your work.

Okay so ace finnaly met his monarch friend so that ansewed my question also I felt like you should've continued to talk about the prison and his life their but whatever also I hope you will make it about how he will be trained by him so he isint carried by his monarch friend also a question his skill is essential works on his imagination so couldn't he basically make anything like a nuke or make literal monsters but all in all its fun to read your work is amazing continue and have a great day.

ahh i just read it now also that ring better make her like a literal angel or demon i hope becuase it sounds cool.

I love it i hope they have to fight the 3 headed dog also love your story

okay ill trust you

The plot is good i just think the voice should talk to him and the mc is dumb j you really think that a d rank boss is going to leave no where cmon other than that its good continue your work and good luck

This book is amazing. At the start it was ehh like the first few words then it took off with the vr then demo then HIM DYING then him getting royalty and him being himself from the demo and making sure beckers idea of the game is protected the story line is amazing also that ring im waiting what it will do.

I have read the whole book and is it worth it YES. It makes you hype every time you read a chapter [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Thanks for the chapter this is the first time I comment on a book and this chapter felt alot like another book but thanks for the chapter and please continue your work [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]