The story so far is really good! It has a great hook and your wanting to see what happens next to young Dawn. I can't wait to see what is to come!

Aww Ken its okay. Demons don't always have to be evil. its a power balance and it seems this goddess forgot that and was very very rude!

Why must people be so mean? Heck why are we so mean to our MCs... Probably to make a good story. But me likes it so far! Lots of hugs.

I like it it's got good characters and a well-developed plot with a lot of action. I can not wait to see what happens next to Richard. I hope the author gets lots of love for this work.

Thank you sometimes I miss counted so how.

The characters are well developed. The plot is interesting, to say the least. I like how the Bones and Victoria bounce off each other. I am a sucker for enemies to lover troop so a vampire hunting half-blood vampire and a pureblood vampire falling in love is <3. I can not wait for more and I hope everyone else enjoyed it as much as I did!

I give you hearts! I love how you set Bones up!

I love the characters. I like the worlds that where building. The writing is good. However jumping from world to world is a headache too keep up with all the time. one reason I don't like stories that have multiple worlds ... I had the same issue with the pendragon books.

The story is moving along well and I like how the characters interact with each other. While I am not a system fan its not a bad story and I wish the author luck.

It has a great story line. The characters are well developed. The plot seems to know what its doing. You can lose yourself in this story and its characters.

Its a good story the plot is good. The characters are well developed. I can't wait for more! The way the author has it going just makes you want more.

Its a good story has a well written characters. and I can see where the plot is going nicely. so while I like that I hope to see some plot twist and turns. its a great read and I can't wait for more.

The story is great. I like it. The plot is sound, it flows nicely and has some interesting characters. I can't wait to see what happened next.

Its a good story. I got a little lost at the beginning but that straighted out itself. But that's probably just me. It has some interesting characters and its got a good plot going!

I have loved it so far can not wait for more!

she shrunk!

well... okay then let's see what happens next!

I wouldn't know grammarly is my beat friend

I love it! Thank you for not copping out with the language it was an odd way to deal with a language barrier. A seed! *giggles* I can't wait for the next chapter with big brother Oliphym.

I love it!