Thanks, I'm actually interested. Sorry for the late reply though, I haven't been here in a while. School stuff...

wow, you got me there. LOL.[img=recommend]

wow, this book is amazing. You need to read it ASAP. Of course, you'd wonder how the author would manage with the supporting character premise...I did too. But the author's done exceptionally well, though he becomes the mc to us, he still acts with the supporting character idealogy, one which the author has used so well. I'll recommend this book to y'all. It's great.

nice building there

I really like this guy

I like this guy

light novel...LOL

LOL, stranger things....

*hill?

I'd be lying if I said I could give a good review after chapter 3 but I'll say that I like how there are many questions which can only be answered by further reading. The pace can do a bit of slowing down too, more detailing, take a moment and really live in it. All in all, the book has potential and I'd like to see where it goes.✌🏽

I like the book though I think you should reveal more through dialogue than just saying it so we feel like we're reading the book and not like you are reading a book to us. I also think you should slow down in some aspects of the book too. However, I like the way you formed your own terms, complete with the abbreviations and all. Pay more attention to detail, good luck

It's a story with a lot of potential, it just needs a bit of work. I'd recommend Grammarly and more attention to detail. It's a good read though if you like fast-paced stories

are bouncers and jumpers the same?

bouncer what's that?

This dialogue is somewhat confusing

ascending?

u know what comes next😂👇🏽

where's half advanced in all this? Before advanced? Or after...