Oh this is amazing. My mind is already running wild about how the story will unfold. The writer has an unusual beauty with language. She is cathartic.

Nice prologue the writer has potential although every chapter ends up with the reader kind of confused.

The prologue was quite interesting.

Excellent story. The story promises to be exciting. Can't wait. The writer has a way of speaking your interests and making you look forward to the next chapter. Absolutely amazing