sarcasm Is free but I could provide almost any service (besides sexual service) for a price

that is an awesome picture Also I would suggest that when he splits in half he can control both bodies (at first it would be hard then after awhile it will become natural) as he is very vulnerable when he splits (can't say how many times my teammates use hanzo ult in the open and almost instantly die 😿)

Forgot to mention in that long reply but if you do add the chat group try to make it different/less cliche. Also try to add different characters in it that would get along (some characters you can have may be ash/luffy/naruto/a character in mlbb/yuno/ then some females characters to provide diversity (hopefully it isn't a harem but if it is try to make it a small one)

Well it mainly depends on you if you want to make the chat group All you have to do is make the people in the chat group have their normal personalities. You also have to make sure the chat group is fun to read as you can focus on that when you don't have any ideas. You can also talk about how his life is going once he gets the chat group (does he get a better job/ what are some struggles he had before the chat group and how does he fix those struggles) I would say to add the chat group as it is a good way to focus on other things unrelated to action and you don't lose much making it (besides time). Also will it be the mc has hanzo's power or the mc is hanzo in a different world because if it is the latter you can have character development so he opens up more to people (in the chat group). Well a power chart would be kinda hard to make with so many different worlds and in some worlds the humans are weak but have strong technology/ a strong weapon (one such world could be the pokemon world they are mostly weak themselves but they have pokemon) but you could also just make it on the people themselves and not external factors. Here is a simple power chart I thought of Human (they can be from normal humans to trained humans but they are ultimately humans) Super human (Peak of human strength though still human ex: captain america) Powered human (Humans with powers could normally be in human/super human ex:devil fruits/weak magic/genin ninjas/ most pokemon. These are mainly normal people who obtained power. imagine a random citizen in one piece who obtained a devil fruit if it is somewhat good they may be able to be people who trained like zoro(before alabasta if they never trained/fought)) Super powered human ( Mostly peak human strength with strong powers. people like karp/hokage/most characters in mlb This is all I got right now but you may be able to improve bit for your fanfic. Can't wait to read your fanfic. I wish you great luck writing it 😊😊

However what you didn't realize was that I placed a transformation justu on natasha so when saw a fake natasha (that was my shadow clone) she wanted to find new information but you killed her in cold blood

Oh ok thanks for the explanation 😊

However what you didn't realize that was my shadow clone. I then sneakily follow you to find natasha. Once natasha is spotted she will be killed

in the pokedex wasn't abra a human child so a max evolution one should still be somewhat human (ik the pokedex is probably lying tho)

you should change the levels a bit 10-20 (10-19) 21-35(20-34) 36-50(35-49) so on and so on

he had good intentions but the outcome was bad... wow he indirectly killed 10 people but he was doing something to save another life... wow this is confusing as other fanfics give the Mc more positive Karma for indirectly saving people so it should work the opposite way. I would hate to be that god in this dilemma

The author is now famous yay Have fun with this fan base that is both a lot of fun and a bit toxic Also in the future hopefully this won't be as sickly sweet as it is now I got a cavity just from reading this. Anyways have a good day/night and I hope you keep it up Hope you survive 2020 phase 2 as you can't say 2021 without saying 2020 so it makes it seem that 2020 was a tutorial and 2021 is the first level...

New reply next chapter But hey I can somewhat understand what you are thinking not fully but somewhat Though you must be annoyed from all these comments saying that. Though like you said in another reply that Nat may not trust him anymore once he reveals himself to her so he is revealing himself bit by bit. So do you think it will be possible for the Mc to have kids with Nat in the future (He either heals her with something you made up or they adopt kids)? I think I am now slowly but surely thinking this is a romance fanfic instead of what it was before...

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I always hate when they go deep in the relationship (I'm fine if it's just setting it up but I don't need to know about dates or s*x scenes afterwards) Also like you said I absolutely hate it if they can read each other's mind (I kinda understand what those authors think mainly they will trust each other more and fall for each other way more) but I just hate it personally....

idk how they went from taxes to hydra vs nod in the replies here

like I said relationships based on lies and deceptions are good

a special relationship with the government then you now don't have to pay taxes (it sounds like a monopoly card)

also that sfx looks like it was made for a baby crying and when I first saw the paragraph I imagined her crying like a baby (I know she isn't a cry baby and she has bottled up emotions and that it is completely normal to cry it's just that's how I imagined it at first)

well I personally wouldn't do sfx as most of the time it's *BANG/BOOM (Random Mc name) punched the (random antagonist name) so hard it made a devastating explosion They do the sfx and then explain what the sfx is and sometimes the sfx just doesn't fit in with the reading like the WAH from the paragraph

this was good before all the sugar and sweetness and I'm fine with the Mc having a lover but now when I'm reading this I feel cringe everywhere and sometimes I turn off my phone wait a minute turn it on again and try to finish the chapter because I'm hoping in the future it isn't so sugary sweet