LittleDragon99999
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Awesome world background (my guy's got a whole story planned but somehow left it a pt 10 chapters like c'mon!) Writing quality is pretty good, my guy just needs more experience to sound more natural :D. Story development is good as well, things don't get too rushed nor is the story and content 'watery'. Character design I'm giving it a 4 for now cause of MC's improvement but we'll see later. Stability of updates only 2 stars sadly cause my guy skipped 7 months of uploading! (Trust me, I know this dude has more, he has literally written so much but he just hasn't uploaded! neircnjerh eruivneruivn! COME ONLINE AND UPLOAD BRO!)
Bro, I thought you were still at MTLNation?
Time to murder some pedestrians 😈... MURDER ON MY MIND
How weird... How did Notch give up so easily...?
I hope you continue updating :)
Yeah, I'm still waiting for translation though.
Kingdom*
Evil rabbity strikes agai- AHHHH IT'S AFTER ME!!!!! HELP!!!!! SOS!
I straight up thought of 'absolute hypnosis in another world'. Any other cultured people with me? 😏
Bye bye 👋 Ron, we won’t miss you.
Bro’s flexing 💪
Lol, you get used to it. But to be honest, Ron’s annoying.