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ey3euw821yrCommentedquestion is he invisible as in cannot be seen. or invincible as in cannot be broken.
[Remark: For 10 seconds, I am Invisible!]- ey3euw821yrCommented
Have mercy
Quintillion was a lot of things, he was ugly, maybe foolish also but he recognized the signs of reality. - ey3euw821yrCommented
The moment quintillion came to the author's mind.
This was a Diran that was above the others. He was not exactly more intelligent than the others, he was foolish and ugly like any other Diran, what he had was an amplified version of his siblings' advantages. - ey3euw822yrCommented
oh boy this romance was forced if the word love was substituted with lust that would have been more authentic. At least make it legit, if they really loved each not some sort lust due to a past crush they wouldn't have need to switch to atlantians on their so called first date. this was clearly seen in the slap chapter where Sebastian only saw Eliana as love interest after transforming her. this is often done in harem novels (not a big fan) to skip the early stages due to sheer amount of heroins. with this I can only assume Josephine would join in this "love" followed hilariously by the queen shark for some gilf action, but leave little coco alone don't break tosh's heart
Since day 1 even before he arrived at the Rainbow Waterfall after Eliana confessed her feelings to him, he had been in a situation that he could only describe as a heightened state of mind. - ey3euw822yrCommentedCh 1 Egg?
- ey3euw822yrCommented'WOO!!! BABY! THAT'S WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT!' Lin Wu rejoiced in his mind.
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The fillers are killing this story. It's fun for a few chapters but they're straying more and more from the story. A whole chapter about waiting for shirong. I can only assume what the next chapter is "being surprised by the Ji clan, the one after will be walking to deer city, and so on at this rate it is going to take more than 10 chapters to enter the forest. I really love this story but, it is sad seeing you force yourself to fill a chapter quota. Tbh you should drop a quality chapter every few days or take a week if you're busy. with that being be said, this is just my opinion feel free to disregard it.
Ch 766 Late Arrival - ey3euw822yrCommentedCh 1393 Birth, Old Age, Sickness, and Death
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Lin Wu's final form
"You know… I can offer you the same. Surrender now and I won't eat you… or at least I won't eat you raw." Lin Wu offered. "Don't worry, I'll give you a worthy marinate. I'll use a secret mix of eleven spirit herbs and spices. I'll coat you in the eggs of Dao Shell realm beasts and then coat you again the flour of the finest spirit wheat and corn. Finally, I'll fry you in the oil extracted from the best Spirit olives!" - ey3euw822yrCommented
Here I thought it was a long chapter.
This paragraph has been deleted. - ey3euw822yrCommentedCh 1243 The Pillar of Impermanence
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I just noticed shouldn't Lin wu be slithring, cuz the thought of Lin wu walking is funny to me a huge worm with tiny legs
"Sorry about that." Lin Wu said and walked towards the pedestal. "So, it's done?" he asked. - ey3euw822yrCommented
I don't understand why Lin chose her over tian han the other would have been easier to manipulate with gains.
"Do you want to live?" A voice said in her head. - ey3euw822yrReplied to C_Meta_FreedomCh 607 Heading To The Tian Clan
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Here I thought we would see imperial censor fights. Guess that's down the bin my guy can fight anyone below Dao. wasted potential
Feeling helpless, Lin Huang could only halt things here and shook his head while forcing a smile. "The duration of this closed-door cultivation session has gone on long enough. It's time to leave." - ey3euw822yrCommented
I reckon writing 2 chapters along your other novel is forcing you to release more and more fillers. I believe 1 relevant chapter is much better than many unnecessary. Ps. many dwell on the fillers to meet a certain quota but eventually they get side tracked creating a maze in which the main plot is lost. Welp at the end of the day it's just an opinion and for all I know this might be crucial in the bigger plot.
Satisfaction And Good Sleep - ey3euw822yrCommented
Some flex tape and it'll be as good as new.
'That's a lot of damage… doesn't seem like it can be fixed directly or quickly for that matter…' Lin Wu thought to himself. - ey3euw822yrCommentedCh 1 The Patriarch of Villains