Mad_man13
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Percy Jackson + Riordan verse- Mad_man131dCommented
This makes no sense It should be her giving it to him
The guy gave me a letter stating that I am allowed to possess wands, so it should be fine. - Mad_man131dCommented
It should say stared at her
"Calm," I said and stared at him. "Look into my eyes." - Mad_man131dCommented
I feel like this is kinda a boring motivation and isn’t very compelling, like getting strong to survive the marvel universe
And finally, the third condition: I wouldn't conquer or destroy the world. The world entertained me. I'd have endless fun scaring people, even venturing to other countries to terrorize anyone, be they heroes, villains, or cosmic beings. - Mad_man131dCommented
I feel like his dissent Into evil was to fast. And I protagonist who only wants to kill people just to kill them is boring. And you might say he’s also trying to get strong but that feels secondary like it’s a byproduct of his killing and not the reason for it.
Next, I began to undress her, cutting her stomach while singing an old song. Slowly, I extracted her organs and arranged them like a scarf around Alice's neck. "Perfect!! It's great," I exclaimed. - Mad_man131dCommented
I don’t really like when people do this. Nothing against the story for it I just dislike it.
"Well... if you want, I can block your memories. When you reach a certain age, you could recover them. For you, it would seem as if you transmigrated, but it is a reincarnation. It's like blocking something in a person's mind and then recovering it at an exact age," Tom explained. - Mad_man1319dCommented
I feel like this is to much and at the same time doesn’t matter, I mean he’s the shadow monarch your over complicating things when his shadow monarch powers are more than enough for him to steamroll everything
I would have to continue to purify my core to see if I discover anything new. So for now the only thing I could do is practice the Rokushiki Techniques and purify my mana core. - Mad_man1322dReplied to cardo_sinclair
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Yeas I know I was just using an exaggerated example to get my point across. You still have the problem of him being able to have unlimited resources.
The soul then said: I want the power of Minecraft's creative mode with the Player Hub. The soul then thought: this way I can have money, portions, magic books, power of creation among other things. - Mad_man1324dReplied to FanboyDeowerpower
I feel like give him Minecraft creative is a little much. I mean he would basically be unkillable with the infinite amount of golden apples and undying totems he could create. You should had given him the ability to craft stuff from Minecraft if he gathered the right materials. So he would have to work for it.
The soul then said: I want the power of Minecraft's creative mode with the Player Hub. The soul then thought: this way I can have money, portions, magic books, power of creation among other things. - Mad_man1329dPosted
- Mad_man1329dReplied to Storm2023
Preach brother
The soul then said: I want the power of Minecraft's creative mode with the Player Hub. The soul then thought: this way I can have money, portions, magic books, power of creation among other things. - Mad_man131mthCommentedCh 1 The Egg
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Chance not change
Shizune frowned, "What is your problem?" She asked, "Every change you get, you always defile Tsunade-sama's dignity!" - Mad_man131mthCommented
Mahoraga’s abillitie adapts his attack to injure the enemy if give enough time his attacks would be able to harm it
I can't kill it, hell. I can't even hurt it. This is just one part of its body, going against it would be stupid. going down into the water to confront it is even a dumber idea, because even if I adapt to its attacks and abilities, whats the point if I cannot even damage it? I'll just be a cockroach who doesn't know when to die. I'm sure it would annoy it. I have only one option right now that guarantees my survival and the survival of the others. - Mad_man131mthCommented
Yes please keep them as beings beyond the source wall. I’ve read stories that have had them as a in universe species and it comes of really wierd and off putting. Also part of the fun in stories like this is the in universe characters reacting to the out of universe species and its powers.
I also wanted to ask something related to the story. Regarding Green Lantern and the Guardians of Hoe, we all agree that Saiyans don't exist in this universe, right? Their DNA comes from beyond the source wall, as I've noticed many stories referring to Saiyans in their universe without actually changing the storyline. - Mad_man131mthCommentedCh 6 6: Global Cape Watch Online
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Way to many man should been two wishes. One to get reincarnated in black clover and the other to have the powers and appearance of alucard. That’s enough
"Due to you forgiving us even though we messed up,we'll give you a reincarnation into the anime you were about to watch before you died,but to sweeten your pot well give you 8 wishes,4 from the both of us,so what do you wish for?" - Mad_man131mthCommented
Girls to add Naruto: Sakura , hinata, temari, ino, kushina Dragon ball: chi-chi, bulma, videl, android 18 One piece: nami, robin, Yamamoto, boa Hancock, vivi, Bonney, perona Bleach: orihime, rukia, yoruichi, soifon, tier harribel, nel tu, unohana, rangiku, Highschool dxd: Rias, akeno, Asia, koneko, xenovia, ravel, rossweiss, grayfia, irina Highschool of the dead: rei, saya, shizuka, saeko, miku yuuki, yuriko, kyoko
Ch 3 Tsunade first day at work