man, I've been here since ch 20, and so far, the journey is worth it the characters are to die for the Mc isn't brain dead and is smart and continues to lean from his mistakes the side characters are fun too you get emotionally attached to them

it is a good fanfiction with story development that's not shit or rushing through the story. character design I like characters that are smart and don't just think with their dick so that is an upside now the story just got out there but so far the author has been updating regularly. so keep up with the good work world background yes they go around the world but I would like more description like the snow is so heavy that it is almost a snow storm kind of stuff. I just want more flavor. But a great story so far keep up the good work author. ps. I really hate harams because they focus a lot on how many women you can get and don't do anything about how the mc likes them or why the girl wants hime. so good job on not doing that

I read all the chapters so far and I got to say I am not a fan of hearems the story behind the hearems is some what decent the mc is way to much of a horn dog to like so if you like here's and that shit this story is for you but if you don't like hearems then do not read this

if been reading this novel back when it was at 30 ch and the writing gets better by ch 40 but when this novel is finished I recommend going back and improving the chapters