See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

….what just happened….….I can’t even roght now

I dig it. I think that a combo of story telling and POV would be great. Love the story btw!

In it to win it! You keep this story going, I’ll keep reading. Love the new twist here!!

Well written, and has great pacing, and the story while familiar, is doing a great job of being unique. MC is not some dark brooding charecter, but down to earth, and relatable. while only 15 chapters in, excited to see where the author goes with this creation. Would totally recommed.

So far this story is really good, author doesn’t over explain, has built a world that appears to have a long list of possibilities, along with the MC mysterious origin, I am finding it quite compelling. do yourself a favor and give it a read, well worth it!

So angry rIght now! I hope Emery leaves there only to come back later and destroy it!

Very promising! Keep it up!!

Wow.....heart broken over here after reading that! An unexpected event for sure.

This is a great story, the charecter and world development is great, and the break offs from the main charecter arc, are wonderful and truly add to to the whole of the story. Can’t wait to see where this goes!

I was extremely surprised by this. Started reading from the daily recommendations, and had to consume all chapters after the free chapters ended. The charecter development is good, the world, while still having ALOT of unknowns due to the nature of the story, doesnt feel out sized or confusing. The whole story is quite captivating. Super glad i picked this up, and cannot wait for furture chapters!