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PageNotFound11hReplied to King_Of_SpaceTimeI'm well aware lol, it's just that that is an immediate clue
(I'm crazy, this may be the biggest coincidence of all or I actually reincarnated as Odin's son in the Marvel universe.)- PageNotFound2dCommented
1) don't do author notes in the middle of a chapter, it breaks flow 2) reading is a written medium, not visual, so take your time; describe in more detail how he wakes up, what he sees, hears, feels- you can visualise all of that as the author but you need to convey that to us, in as few words as possible, whenever possible.
(A/N: Something feels missing you know. What do you think?? Ugh... this is frustrating, if you can improvise this scene do comment please...) - PageNotFound2dCommented
lambs*?
But they were not planning to be helpless victims in this war. They were more than just lost lamps Tai Lung could force and control to his whims. - PageNotFound4dCommented
aaaand I'm gone
I felt the exquisite softness against my lips and saw Lena's eyes widen in shock and evident confusion. - PageNotFound4dCommented
pacifist?
It was a very bewildered Argo who read Drifter's message. She had heard of pacific mobs before - the kind that only retaliated if players attacked, but didn't make the first move - but never of one that actively tried - and apparently succeeded - in endearing itself to players. - PageNotFound8dCommented
broken leg before proper medical care? they're gonna have to amputate
The number of men I left behind me, screaming in pain, began to increase. Some had broken legs, most were unconscious. Those still awake started screaming in pain, alerting the other small farms I encountered along the way. I saw some curious children peeking out, trying to figure out what was happening before being dragged away by their mothers. - PageNotFound9dReplied to Dr_Void
Loki isn't Odin's son in Norse mythology, he's his sworn brother
(I'm crazy, this may be the biggest coincidence of all or I actually reincarnated as Odin's son in the Marvel universe.) - PageNotFound10dCommented
not having a c section could kill both
Asahi couldn't help but laugh at the ferocity of his mother. There was no doubt this woman was the daughter of a Yakuza leader. Back when the Japanese community frowned on the C-Section as a whole, his mother prioritized his safety over her own. - PageNotFound11dReplied to Kexus
but to create the JDF you have to willingly create slaves
To Peter, and he was sure to the Jedi as well, the idea of owning slaves was abhorrent. Despite the strategic advantage clones might provide, the ethical implications made the option impossible. - PageNotFound16dCommented
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mf commented on the same girls panties, on the same day and calls himself not a pervert
But Issei had other plans, he had detention in Sona's office. 'Detention is way better than being a pervert and getting beat up. ' Issei thought as he arrived in front of the Student Council President's office. - PageNotFound16dReplied to Wanou_16
Yeah
1 SC (System Coin)=10 Lilium (Underworld's currency)=100 US Dollars (Human World's most stable currency) - PageNotFound25dCommented
Put A/Ns at the end
(A/N: Just a reminder, no one but him can hear these whispers. Any trial that uses his personal information will be kept as an illusion that only he sees or hears, so none of his secrets will be revealed. I know most readers don't like that, and truthfully neither do I.) - PageNotFound25dReplied to Adamo_Amet
nah, this one's bad, it doesn't show that she's a knight at all
- The Knight of the False God: A royal who fought for her nation but became disillusioned when she saw wealth accumulating with the rich while the poor suffered. Seeking freedom, she fled and encountered a man claiming to be a god. Inspired by his ideals, she fought alongside him for their cause but he was killed. Unable to accept his death, she believed he was still alive, thinking a god could not die. Driven by this delusion, she waged war against all monarchs, presenting their heads to her perceived immortal god. Her actions, based on a misguided belief, turned her world to ruins and made her a figure feared by everyone. - PageNotFound25dCommented
The Franc is the most stable currency
1 SC (System Coin)=10 Lilium (Underworld's currency)=100 US Dollars (Human World's most stable currency) - PageNotFound27dReplied to Joseph_Hunt_7510
didn't he literally stop them from doing the same the first time he was in the Americas too?
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racist??
Also since I was told there wasn't enough glazing for my radiating, glaze worthy, sexy, white haired, pure, innocent, dazzling, glimmering, slightly racist, definitely racist, beautiful, shimmering, beguiling, handsome, charismatic, gigantic, magnificent, marvellous, seductive, fabulous, NOT DEAD, charming, hilarious, ALIVE, majestic, adorable, succulent, glorious, honoured, blessed, breath-taking, phenomenal, arrogant, deserving, inspiring, brilliant, kind hearted, amiable, humorous, delightful to be around, open hearted, gentle, courageous, pleasant, perfect king Satoru Gojo - PageNotFound29dCommented
No way one fireball is enough to kill a genin from chakra exhaustion, the CP cost is way too high
[ Description: A foundational Fire Style technique where the user compresses a large amount of chakra built up inside their body and expels it as a massive orb of roaring flame. The size of the fireball is dependent on the amount of chakra used. ] - PageNotFound29dCommented
???
[ Conditions can be met. ] - PageNotFound1mthCommented
I've been ignoring it for a while, but Osmium isn't trust some fantastical metal. Despite being hard it's pretty brittle so shields made of just osmium would be like shields made of diamonds- useless. They'd just crack, just say the shields were enchanted or something.
To combat the heavy firepower, the Amazons formed the "Hedgehog" formation, shields interlocked together, deflecting bullets as they advanced steadily towards the enemy. (The shields were made out of Osmium)