Interesting! I want to give this a chance ... Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo! Wohooooo!

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Woot Woot

Wow!

The imagination and world-building of the author are breath-taking! Amazing writing skills! I cannot even criticize anything bout it ... Only Love! Only Love! Only Love! Only Love! Only Love! Only Love! Only Love! Only Love! Only Love! Only Love! Only Love! Only Love! Only Love! Only Love! Only Love! Only Love! Only Love! Only Love! Only Love! Only Love! Only Love! Only Love! Only Love! Only Love! Only Love! Only Love! Only Love! Only Love! Only Love! Only Love! Only Love! Only Love! Only Love!

Good start!

Yup grats for being the first!

Whats the usual genre of the author?

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Why there are no comments? This is a good start to be honest

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Same feelign sweety!

Wishing you luck! The competition is tough. I can only say is that, it is worth it of my time reading this story of yours. Your entry is light and filled with a mixture of adventure, friendship and action. Looking forward to how things will develop. Other concern is, do not drag your plot for too long. 1-5 chapters are standard for plot lines but it is okay to see the effort to improve here. Give this a try, everyone! Hoping the best for this story.

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I cannot stop