StrictlyReading

Ngl ik im only here in the story but this mayla stuff getting super annoying like im starting not to like her & it’s not her fault

Also what happened right after the fight solidified my decision on dropping but I won’t spoil for the future readers

Ngl the time skip was a mess. His parents died off-screen, we never got to see how the city evolved, and out of nowhere, he’s got kids? Ik Amanda said she wanted some but man this was bad. So much potential just wasted and this was clearly rushed.

Yk I never really laugh at comedic lines, & when I do it’s rare. But this was hilarious

Unfortunately im starting to agree . Authors def gotten lazy with everything you just said. And unfortunately he’s dragging stuff out too much where it’s no longer suspense and strictly a drag

They talked to each other awhile back in the training room

Not even trying to defend but it truly does add character depth to each of them when he does it. It’s only a problem when he does too many or give them there own full chapter knowing he’s gonna do others. But 1/2 is fine

How far until you’d say everything is fixed because I was at chapter 48