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Revamping123455dReplied to Revamping12345*Sukuna
"I hate to say this, but stand ashamed, William Verhein; you're weak."- Revamping123455dCommented
W silica reference
"I hate to say this, but stand ashamed, William Verhein; you're weak." - Revamping1234525dCommentedCh 17 Will Of The Mad Pirate
- Revamping1234527dReplied to Sathanas
Yeah but eventually others are gonna want his stuff
'Fuck. I've been hiding in this store for a whole day. I could make it my new home since the streets are flooded with zombies.' Dexter thought as he reached his hand towards a bag of cookies and began eating them. - Revamping123451mthReplied to UnderChain
Oh nah💀
"...If I had received such torturous training when I was young, I might have developed a psychological shadow towards the profession of ninja." - Revamping123452mthReplied to Blindmonkeey
This is a zombie apocalypse being careful is important
Another twenty minutes… Tang Shaoyang still had his eyes glued on the wooden chest. - Revamping123452mthCommentedCh 293 CHAPTER 287(Switching Sides)
- Revamping123452mthPosted
Very interesting book the characters arent bland but it will only intrest you if this is the type of genre you like to read in the first place, the writting is also great however i feel like some paragraph chunks should be broken up or an easier reader experience, except for that its pretty good, but id wait for the author to update a bit more to have more chapters for a long read
- Revamping123452mthCommented
What are they gonna do? Fight back???💀💀
Deku and some of the others are watching him closely, ready to react to anything he does. - Revamping123452mthCommentedCh 2 Form Changing
- Revamping123452mthPosted
Ok this is kinda of interesting, without spoiling too much there's this prophecy between the two kids and stuff like that, however without spoiling, I like how descriptive you are with the characters and the environment, the pacing is alright as each chapter actually drives the story forward, and the character design is great, you can feel the love the characters have for one another
- Revamping123452mthCommented
Prophecy*
Chapter 3: Prophecy - Revamping123452mthPosted
Honestly a good read, its a book with a great world background, it takes inspiration from Chinese novels however the characters arent as annoying as those mtl novels, the author has a good update schedule and the book updated as I was reading so good sign, the tory development is a bit slow however the synopsis for the book has most of the things you can expect from early chapters. Overall actually W book
This book has been deleted. - Revamping123452mthPosted
The writting quality goes up as the chapters go, He update once a day but I was told it was reduce but the amount of words per chapter / quality would go up. Story development is not slow but it changes paces, character desgisns are lowkey perfect taking inspiration from other forms of media, world design is good, a high power ceiling so the mc has a lot of character development to do
- Revamping123453mthReplied to Supreme_Leader
N*GGA WAAAAAAAAAAAAT?????????????💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀
"What, sister?" Hypnos stared at her. "Don't tell me you are chickening out just because he is also your husband?" he provoked with a smile, pointing between them. "What about the pact we made?" - Revamping123453mthReplied to Pertiester
both of you are wrong
A/N: 1601 words :) The next chapter is when they will leave this universe. The Boys is next! Time to kill some corrupt heroes! - Revamping123456mthCommented
engagement*
Tom, still processing everything, asked Peter, "So, you're here just to test your new ship? And why would Nick Fury need to know about your enhancement?" - Revamping123456mthCommented
so why not mention that instead of acting useless😭
This paragraph has been deleted. - Revamping123456mthReplied to Baldysalino
😀why
"F*ck you." Loki stated plainly.