RedBerry_Alchemist

Absolutely loved the chapter, It’s everything I could of hoped for in a Naruto xJ JK fic and some. As for things to spice up the Story during the Academy Arc, There was an Incident between Naruto and Iruka where I think Iruka was going to maybe try killing Naruto? I’m fuzzy on the details. But I’m sure it did happen. If not, I’m just getting mixed up with a Fic i read, but maybe add something like that in to the story and have it be when MC starts to not be so cold towards Naruto, and a few chapters where MC bonds with him. Even a Cool chapter with Naruto over for Dinner at the Nara Clan Compound would be awesome, especially if something goes down when he’s there.

Balanced Revival Syatem. If the Main Character is going to get into trouble Like Naruto Does in the seriess, Then a way to revive the Shikigami would be best. If you want suggestions Have it be a Cooldown for their revival or a complex ritual of some kind.

My only problem is that there aren't enough chapters to satiate my lust for a good story. The characters are amazinng in every way, and in my opinion, I haven't read such good outside of EPIC. The Story was well-developed and not rushed at all. And every single chapter was well written and worth the timee took to read. I hope with all my heart that you continue this soon, I couldn't bare to see such a well written story go unfinished

plz update soon, I know real life can be a pain, but this is one of the stories that really helps with my own problems by giving me an escape. The writing and the story is amazing so far, and i hope you find the strength to write more chapters.

thank you so much, I’ll make sure to disclose that in the Synopsis, hope you have a wonderful day and that life stops beating you over the head.

Also, like i said before I have been thinking of trying to write my own story with the same basic premise as yours, would it be ok if I do? I ask because I want to get permission to adapt your work and not just straight up steal your hard work.

If only this wasn't dropped, I was in love with the story and would have loved to see it to completion

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probably not, but well see how it goes

Thank you for the feedback