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    Bovely_Ashraf3yr
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    okey this story have a great world building a great power system and good story telling but man the mc is just a pain in the ass i can understand his behavior too mia and daniel and have some trust issues truma but why he just getting pissed when peaple take to him or have any kind of communication and beggan his child truntum in his thougth and want to be alone and get stronger .for every sec. he meet someone he became asshole for no reason and have traites not in character just bec. the cheating and it some boring cliches to force the mc to be alone its to bad from the auther to be forcing the mc to be someone annoying as hell , like he figth the red dragon not just bec the peaple he know or any other side chracter that but to save the baby , even the deisions he make due some bullshit reason. auther u create one of disgusting mc in a good story with no character devolpment at all

    Unlimited Power 02 - The Ranger's Domain
    Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
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  • Bovely_Ashraf
    Bovely_Ashraf3yr
    Replied to Millman97

    Is there any romance

    The Legendary Mechanic
    Games · Qi Peijia
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