LogicalStaw

she quicker than my sister

no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no

Lex Luther pls

The story progression is well planned out, there are time skips but with the longevity of Asgardians it means little. (For now in the timeline). There are some grammatical errors that happen, not constantly but it isn't rare either. The errors that do show up are easy to miss at first glance or correct at a re-read. The Characters feel more alive than most fanfics that I've had the... (dis)pleasure of reading. Each (major/prominent) character introduced, have their own personality that are well crafted. The MC is one of my favorites for his likability, intelligence, goals, and power set. Other Characters don't simply nod their heads and agree with what he said, simply because he's the MC. I fu'king hate that. They don't gawk with mouths open nor cough blood from anger.(that is seriously weird though, like see a doctor). The world building seems lackluster compared to the rest, although, I would rather have fleshed out character's, motives, story and writing prowess than the background world detail or lore of it's people. All in all love the story would 39/10 recommended, Thank you Author.

Thanks for the chapter.

Ain't gonna lie, that fight made my eyes sweat a little.

Since no Anbu made it out alive, let's send three genin and their instructor. Wasn't Anbu supposed to be the best of the best in a village?

same

Great story Author, please keep up with the great work! Thank you for this amazing read.