Asyrie

I'm just quite busy right now and kind of slumping on how to continue the story because it's quite a while since I wrote.

Hey man, I’m sorry I haven’t uploaded new chapters I was thinking about your suggestion but I guess I’ll use it in my new book. It’s not the same genre but I hope you’ll try reading it.

Hello everyone, I hope you'll support my new book. I've been inspired to create a story related to zombies, drawing from my love for playing games and reading content related to this theme. Thank you for your support!

i'll consider that suggestion :) thank you for reading my book.

sure sure add me _azrie.

You can check it, my bad took so long.

Your novel shows potential, but some chapters are a bit confusing. I believe it would benefit from some careful editing to enhance clarity and coherence. As a fellow author, I understand the challenges of crafting a seamless flow and compelling story. Take your time to refine the narrative for better quality, ensuring that readers can fully understand and enjoy the experience.

hello! thank you again for the review. I'll drop by a comment for now ;)

Hello, thank you for reviewing my novel. I'm sorry I can't review your story yet since I need to read all the chapters first, but I will comment for now. I like this kind of friendship, the interaction between friends, and how you can imagine how they talk to each other. The family of Cedric accepting Alister as their own is kind of cute because it's similar to how my novel started with two friends who are close to each other. I'm looking forward reading the rest!

nice new chapter!