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Asyrie

Asyrie

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2020-12-08 JoinedJapan
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  • Asyrie
    Asyrie5mth
    Replied to 3aMAyatSu

    I'm just quite busy right now and kind of slumping on how to continue the story because it's quite a while since I wrote.

    Ch 36 Revelation
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  • Asyrie
    Asyrie5mth
    Replied to Goodorbad

    Hey man, I’m sorry I haven’t uploaded new chapters I was thinking about your suggestion but I guess I’ll use it in my new book. It’s not the same genre but I hope you’ll try reading it.

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  • Asyrie
    Asyrie5mth
    Posted

    Hello everyone, I hope you'll support my new book. I've been inspired to create a story related to zombies, drawing from my love for playing games and reading content related to this theme. Thank you for your support!

    Apocalypse Undead
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  • Asyrie
    Asyrie6mth
    Replied to Goodorbad

    i'll consider that suggestion :) thank you for reading my book.

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  • Asyrie
    Asyrie7mth
    Replied to sorafin

    sure sure add me _azrie.

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  • Asyrie
    Asyrie7mth
    Replied to SoulNexus

    You can check it, my bad took so long.

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  • Asyrie
    Asyrie7mth
    Posted

    Your novel shows potential, but some chapters are a bit confusing. I believe it would benefit from some careful editing to enhance clarity and coherence. As a fellow author, I understand the challenges of crafting a seamless flow and compelling story. Take your time to refine the narrative for better quality, ensuring that readers can fully understand and enjoy the experience.

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  • Asyrie
    Asyrie7mth
    Commented

    hello! thank you again for the review. I'll drop by a comment for now ;)

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  • Asyrie
    Asyrie7mth
    Commented

    Hello, thank you for reviewing my novel. I'm sorry I can't review your story yet since I need to read all the chapters first, but I will comment for now. I like this kind of friendship, the interaction between friends, and how you can imagine how they talk to each other. The family of Cedric accepting Alister as their own is kind of cute because it's similar to how my novel started with two friends who are close to each other. I'm looking forward reading the rest!

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  • Asyrie
    Asyrie7mth
    Commented

    nice new chapter!

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  • Asyrie
    Asyrie7mth
    Replied to Raphis

    Yes I could :)

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  • Asyrie
    Asyrie7mth
    Replied to athosanimewrites

    thank you!

    Ch 1 The Beginning
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  • Asyrie
    Asyrie7mth
    Replied to SoulNexus

    No its okay, I dont plan to rush what’s happening in my story.

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  • Asyrie
    Asyrie7mth
    Replied to SoulNexus

    Sorry I dont understand this comment.

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  • Asyrie
    Asyrie7mth
    Replied to SoulNexus

    Yes i’ll comment soon! I’m just busy

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  • Asyrie
    Asyrie7mth
    Replied to SoulNexus

    Sorry guys, I got busy since I have class. I might post the new chapters until the end of the day!

    Nightmare's Awakening
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  • Asyrie
    Asyrie7mth
    Replied to SoulNexus

    Sorry I havent. maybe this weekend since I’ll have alot of free time by then.

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  • Asyrie
    Asyrie7mth
    Replied to 3aMAyatSu

    look forward for the next chapters!

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  • Asyrie
    Asyrie7mth
    Replied to 3aMAyatSu

    That’s true. It’s kinda cool that you and your friends only what’s the meaning of it lol

    Their communication was vital. They used a special set of hand signals and gestures to convey information without making any noise. With a final nod to each other, they executed their plan.
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  • Asyrie
    Asyrie7mth
    Replied to 3aMAyatSu

    I’ll drop by to your story soon! Hope you still read the book.

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