Trouble_13

Even though it’s a mid overall the story is pretty good to me, it just needs more depth but I’ll change my review when it gets better in the future

This shit got me so mad.ahahahahahahahahhahahah

What’s Ao3? If you don’t mind me asking.

I hope you keep it up it was really good and I hope you keep the idea going

Are you kidding me he was locked up for ten years then he becomes a slave for them to pay back his debts it’s stupid you could’ve did it differently but you did this shit.

It’s overall good, but i feel that the chapters are short, story development is slow, and I’m not talking about cultivation but the general story of development.