awesome story lots of adventure and sword fighting. cool characters and great twist on the omega role for the main character. this author really knows how to tell a story.

i like the story. But, I get confused when you use its and it for the proper pronouns he ,his, him, and even her. Could you please edit this story and fix these sort of errors. Thanks, JCat

defenses not defences please fix typos they get in the way of the story thanks