Great story. I enjoy reading it, especially the scene where the person who killed an entire royal family acted like a naive young man who follow his mother's every instruction and keep problems at bay.

Great start, nice plot, though a bit weak when it comes to plot twist. But overall, it's cool. All the very best for your competition. Wish you success and victory.

Thank you so much, for letting me know. With sincere and warm regards Silence.