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Tide_9733minCommentedSo when do you get an editor?
"Cough... are you previously from mental!?" She angrily said, quickly turning around, afraid to see Leo's action of smelling the essence of the zombie. Although she already turned around, she still couldn't help but shiver slightly.- Tide_977hCommented
In order to”””
Although Leo was only currently at level 19 in the Mortal Realm, in able to increase his level he needed to accumulate/gain almost 2,000 exp to advance... Not only that, killing zombies below his level would inexplicably lessen the exp he will gain! - Tide_978hCommented
SAME
To be exact, Leo always thinks something strange that usually sane people wouldn't think. - Tide_971dCommented
I see math is a basic skill you failed to obtain
Sighing deeply Leo didn't hesitate further as he immediately upgraded the skills. Bringing his original 2,500 horror points to 1,100 points. - Tide_971dReplied to AssassinsLife
Yes, because his physical strength doesn’t need aaaany help.
[ Build up Stamina (Uncommon) - Increased the stamina of a being by 2 per level of the skill. - Tide_971dCommented
Dude idk where you live, stay away from minors. There shouldn’t BE a problem
Although there might be some minor problems with the grammar, If you find some please remind me so I can avoid the problem in the future. - Tide_971dReplied to Doukali_Abdeslam
No he became artistic
"Wierd, did the land expand? Or did the Earth expand?" - Tide_972dCommented
A child isn’t this heavy….
He didn't even know why or how he managed to do it in an instant but the strength he shows currently seems incomparable to normal standards, If he could think properly he would learn that this phenomenon is called adrenaline rush. - Tide_972dCommented
In the , one specific colored group would call this a peaceful protest
"Isn't that just a protest? How could be there someone holding a gun!?" - Tide_972dReplied to Dreamylad
Are you in the UK?
"Isn't that just a protest? How could be there someone holding a gun!?" - Tide_972dCommentedCh 1520 Last thought
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WHERE IS THE EXTREMEM OF PRIDE
{The Extremity of Cheats raises the question- who decides on impossibilities?!} - Tide_977dReplied to Taixun
That would expose that he is the sun warrior.
"Now that I know this, I can't just let you go. For what you did, I will forgive you, as long as you give me a hand," Sha Mo said, gesturing to him with his other hand, intimating that he should cut it off. - Tide_9710dCommented
I’m sorry, are these numbers just backwards?
-Space: 0.9 >> 0.2 % - Tide_9710dCommented
More like he wants to put some fluff for word count into this chapter
Atticus would like to document just how much the exosuit improved his power. - Tide_9713dReplied to dablackigneel
I’m really starting to like this family, hope they have a bigger part lol
Please be sure you put on earplugs before entry. This is for your own good. - Tide_9713dCommented
Just thinking about it now, but there was no point villifying auroras father if he was just gonna get killed off. Like the sideshow of him planning to use her as a spy, no real use of that except painting him as a horrible person. And then you just took him out, seems pretty anticlimactic. I think it would have been better if you made it so he somehow started working for the cult and then he could return in a later arc. With the extra details you added and with the sudden ending, it just makes it seem like filler or fluff
After a few seconds of staring at the backs of Atticus and Kael, who were already outside and far away from the building, Zelas turned and headed back to his group. - Tide_9716dCommented'Hahaha, so it's fine if I scratch my ass? It's been eating me for a while.' Apollo chuckled.
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So hes bi now?
Cedric gazed at Atticus and continued, "The life weapon realm isn't just a mere mental construct; it's an alternate dimension closely connected to the real world. The connection between them isn't purely one-way. There's a subtle, bi-directional link between your consciousness in the life weapon's realm and your physical body in the real world."