Nice story da.Instead of one chapter short stories, if you have time, try writing a multi chapter novel next good luck 👍 (I w a n t e d t o p u t t h e r e v i e w i n s t a r s b u t i t d o e s n ' t a l l o w m e t o p o s t w i t h o u t 1 4 0 w o r d s 😅 s o i g n o r e t h i s)

The concept for the story was beautiful and the world building was very detailed. The characters were pretty good too. The choice of words were great but it could be polished more with practise. Overall, the whole story was a pleasant and wholesome experience.

Also the main issue(you know what) should be fixed next time.

The story was intriguing. The characters were likeable. The pacing was pretty fast. The protagonist and the antagonists didn't need to be family though. Overall this was a good read.