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Mitchell_Silver

Mitchell_Silver

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2020-12-06 JoinedUnited States
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  • Mitchell_Silver
    Mitchell_Silver3yr
    Commented

    sounds like she needs ~glasses~

    As they neared the clump of people, the cool --yet humid-- air filled Jane's eyes, leaving her vision yet again impaired.
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    Shackles of Refuge
    Fantasy · MaeverickRevess
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  • Mitchell_Silver
    Mitchell_Silver3yr
    Commented

    yay prison! :))

    "If you are to take me up on this, you're aware the children will never be allowed outside of the dome as long as their scent is hidden?"
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    Shackles of Refuge
    Fantasy · MaeverickRevess
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  • Mitchell_Silver
    Mitchell_Silver3yr
    Posted

    lllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll The characters are interesting and I love the time period and the concept of the dome, I'm very interested to see what happens later on :) iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

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    Shackles of Refuge
    Fantasy · MaeverickRevess
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  • Mitchell_Silver
    Mitchell_Silver3yr
    Commented

    This was really interesting to read! I like the writing style the only thing I would change is that you should add more character description, help us imagine what they look like

    Ch 1 Red mercy
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    Pitch pirates
    Fantasy · Slain
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  • Mitchell_Silver
    Mitchell_Silver3yr
    Commented

    ok but the cover art is bomb

    Ch 1 Just an old Book
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    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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