Excellent use of powerful words. You have the potential to become the author of an award winning novel. I hope you keep writing such great stories.

Absolutely love the concept of the story, I really look forward to reading more from you. The writing is just magnificent. Your story is just mind-blowing. Please never stop writing stories. Your stories are just WOW.

The stories are very interesting. They are very creative. Your vocabulary is tremendous. I look forward to reading more of your amazing stories.