Man, you have such fucking amazing skills writing, it is my first time seeing such background development in a story, what you did this chapter will let you go through many amazing ways to develop the story. Thank you for the chapter I really like the idea of more big chapter like this one.

Wow, thank you for your review, it will really help if someday i start a story.

The chapter was amazing bro, so relax, and it's like you said, the more you write more you will know how to write. For me you could even demand payment for your work, that is how amazing your writing skills are to me and I absolutely don't want you to drop this novel because you are dismotivated. That is it bro, i will be waiting for more chapters of this amazing story.