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"flexed and burgled"... those thieving muscles! lol
I can't be the only one chuckling at the name Feloniata? Felon. Even better that the name is preceded by Neverie.. Never? or Very? Very Felon-like.
that, or his own mother and father had issues, giving him a difficult childhood.
I love the 'field' typo. it immediately brought to mind a field full of hate, like red flowers blooming or something just as silly, like flowers with hands curled into fists with just ooooone finger sticking up above the rest. .. you know which finger
haha don't change it, author... leave it.. I think we all thought of hard candy first, and best way to enjoy those is a nice long.. lick
respect is earned
I hope Isla razes to the ground and salts the soil in the garden before she leaves
only on paper at this point
oh, good... he's being played with like a puppet, just like he's doing to Isla
typical. the ultimate cause was his philandering, but he's deflecting onto the reasonably reactive wife who was unwillingly placed into that position by him and others. a little too real lol, good job author
thank you for that. needed a laugh to stop the crying
all I can think is what a master manipulator Lizzy is. gotta hand it to you, author, most people do not write manipulation so well or so subtly. this is very well done with all the little points from described expressions, setups, reverse psychology, and gaslighting. beautifully done. more and more I think the little girl who died in the hospital in Korea was the author, and that she's possessed Lizzy and had lost herself to the story to feel as alive and loved as possible.
this gif choice has absolutely left me laughing my head off