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Hello author! I like the premise of the story, isekai is one of my favorite genres, tbh. I like the potential in your story, and the characters are engaging and interesting. The lore of the story is good, and it brings depth into the tale. The one thing I would say, Author, that might be constructive criticism, is in English it is hard for me to read the story. I'm sure that's true of most translations, though...