Very good story with a great beginning. I cannot wait un the next chapter is out.

Very good story and characters. I wasn’t expecting a story based on a different type of transmigration, so thst caught me by surprise. I can’t wait to see more chapters.

Story was overall fine…until the ending where it felt a bit rushed or had skipped scenes. The changing of names or misspelled names made reading the story a bit frustrating at best. Also, this story is similar to many others to the point where you wonder if anyone has any original ideas other than the retelling of the same story over and over again.

Dang…this story has got me hooked! The wrting is far better than I had expected and the cliffhanger at the end of the current posted last chapter has got me craving for more…wondeting what’ll happen next. Keep up the good work.

So far this story isn’t too bad…it has potential; however, the scenario is too similar to several orher stories I’ve read. Needs more originality to not sound like a rehash if other stories.

To Author: Your new story “The Solider Husband” is incorrectly spelled. The correct spelling would be ”The Soldier Husband”.

This story literally got me hooked! I could not put it down … until the last chapter that had been posted. I am definitely looking forward to the continuation of this story. Great job author!

Sorry for your loss.

It should say “suicide attempt” since she attempted to commit suicide; if she had succeeded then it would read as a “suicide”.

Shouldn’t the word be “grandfather” instead of father!?

I would change the word “dress” (what women wear) to the word “suit” (normally associated clothing for men who work as a CEO).

Not sure how these “Trial Read” books work; however, for whatever it’s worth, I hope they continue with the story (without too many chapters). It has been very interesting to read and the background story is very intriguing…it draws you in.

This story is so exciting to read. I can hardly wait to see what happens next!

Nian Che is not “husband”. Nian Che is her “brother-in-law”.

01-19-22: I am enjoying this story. Hope to be able to read more.

Serves her right…

A bit confused: Was it Donovan or Zachary who thought the Princess was a gem and was wanted by their side?

I wonder if the Queen is her biological mot her?

“Nearly 7 inches tall…”!?! Not very tall if inches is used in this context…don’t you mean “nearly 7 feet tall…”!?!

I am loving this story. It definitely peaked my interest.