Trouble2023

Very good story with a great beginning. I cannot wait un the next chapter is out.

Very good story and characters. I wasn’t expecting a story based on a different type of transmigration, so thst caught me by surprise. I can’t wait to see more chapters.

Story was overall fine…until the ending where it felt a bit rushed or had skipped scenes. The changing of names or misspelled names made reading the story a bit frustrating at best. Also, this story is similar to many others to the point where you wonder if anyone has any original ideas other than the retelling of the same story over and over again.

Dang…this story has got me hooked! The wrting is far better than I had expected and the cliffhanger at the end of the current posted last chapter has got me craving for more…wondeting what’ll happen next. Keep up the good work.

So far this story isn’t too bad…it has potential; however, the scenario is too similar to several orher stories I’ve read. Needs more originality to not sound like a rehash if other stories.

To Author: Your new story “The Solider Husband” is incorrectly spelled. The correct spelling would be ”The Soldier Husband”.

This story literally got me hooked! I could not put it down … until the last chapter that had been posted. I am definitely looking forward to the continuation of this story. Great job author!

Sorry for your loss.

It should say “suicide attempt” since she attempted to commit suicide; if she had succeeded then it would read as a “suicide”.

Shouldn’t the word be “grandfather” instead of father!?