ujjwalanushka34
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I love the "place to love the unloved" part.
Use smth else instead of perk, it doesn't go well with the scenario you're creating
It would sound better if you say her footsteps echoed in the darkness
So far I am loving the concept. And the title is catchy too. I love how you stitch everything together to make complete sense. It's just a suggestion, maybe break down the chapters more? It just makes readers feel more satisfied with themselves when they read more chapters if that makes sense. Keep writing! I am so proud of you!!!
Break down the sentence, it is a runoff.
Removing has would be better
Ahaha love that
I am confused. Is he already into corporate lifestyle or not?
✨The story of my life ✨
The Vivian and Allery part is confusing. I would suggest clearing this scene out more.
lied down on her bed and buried
take the comma off