Definitely a step above any other Victorious fic out there. A few grammar mistakes, but nothing more than a few mispelled words. Definitely a lot better than most authors on here. The story so far is good, but it's still early. Hope you don't drop.

I really don't know what you're talking about. The MC has been showing his arrogance since he started going to Hogwarts. The way that he enjoys showing off and yelling at his professor showed that. And his way of fighting has always been the same. He's a brawler. He's always been a brawler.

It wasn't the normal troll that they faced. It was a troll similar to the ones in Legacy.

It ripped it from the ground.

He will interfere in some places, I can't go into it much as it's spoilers. Chamber of Secrets will be drastically different to how it usually goes. Prisoner of Azkaban will have some changes, but not too drastic. Goblet of Fire is really where things will be entirely different going forward.

I was surprised that he was an actual boxer. I chose the name because I was listening to a Zombies video when I was making the chapter and Dempsey's my favorite character. 😅

I think it depends on the person really. I have seen some people who are really mature for their age and I've seen some very... VERY childish people. Most of them being in college...

You... did you come up with that on the spot? Because if so, that is... a very dark thought process to immediately pop into your head...

That's exactly what I mean. He's not mentally mature. He was a depressed seventeen year old that regressed into the body of a five year old. He now has a chance to somewhat live what he missed the first time around. Idk if it was this comment or another comment where I said this, but he's not an adult. His choice in clothing was made to reflect that. And later reveal how young he was when he died, but I guess not. But the point is this. He's not an adult. He's not mentally mature. He was a kid who had nothing going for him. Now he's a kid with everything going for him.

No. It makes you cultured.

Three years being taught how to prostrate yourself isn't going to magically make someone polite. I mean... just look at Draco... And I believe that I captured exactly what I intended. Before, he was a guy who didn't anything to live for. No family, no friends, no girlfriend. He didn't even have a dog. He legitimately didn't care that he died and just wanted to know where he was going. Now he has friends, a grandfather, and is possibly the most talented wizard ever to exist whilst also being taught by one of the most feared wizards to ever exist. He's riding a high. And eventually he's going to come down.

You realize that you just pointed out the entire reason he's becoming like this, right? He knows the entire plot. He knows EXACTLY what's going to happen. You're telling me that some people won't become overconfident when they not only have the knowledge of the future that is set in stone, but they also have overpowered abilities? That is just blatantly not true. He WAS cautious at first then, after obtaining power that doesn't come easily for even talented wizards, became cocky. He's overestimating himself as some people tend to do in situations like this. And what you said about Grindelwald beating it out of him, that's the exact reason why his son wants nothing to do with him. You think he's gonna try and do the same approach with his grandson when it obviously didn't work the first time with his son?

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Well, the reason it seems like Jason spends more time with Draco is because of the circumstances. Almost all the chapters recently have been about his first day at Hogwarts. It's not like he's spending less time with his grandfather, it's just that he can't exactly have a conversation with old grandpa Gellert in the middle of class with a bunch of people around him.

The bratty attitude is intentional. It's to show that as he grows in power, the more irrational decisions he makes. I'm trying to showcase that he's becoming cocky and overconfident in his abilities. Which I believe that some people would become if they gained magical abilities. And what you said about him acting unbecoming of his age. I never said at what age he died. It will be revealed later, but his attitude and choice of clothing was meant to imply that he died very early in his life. As his clothing is typically worn by highschool/college students.

I was actually debating for a long time between Fluer and Pansy. Ultimately decided to go with Pansy as I've haven't seen a fic with her as the LI

Yup. It will be explained.

That's because the ring with the sign of the Deathly Hallows was the Lord's Ring.