I hate it when the chapters come to an end like this.... send more now!

when doing dialogues try to use " and not ' .. the ' is usually reserved for thoughts, and the " is for dialogues with others.. this makes it easier and doesn't leave too much lost..

it always makes me angry with authors who reincarnate a person into a different world.. and don't make that person learn at least the basics of the world before making any decision.. those first chapters are boring.. he is boring acting ignorant all the time. ...and he might try to adapt to the common sense of the cultivation world first..before making any decisions..

Só espero que ele se case e tenha uma família...

How old is Aaron? I'm lost..

but it's good..she is a good woman of good character..so i would like her to become your woman..

huh..but the blonde didn't tell him not to go see their parents because it was dangerous???? does the MC have amnesia?

man.. the chapters get a little confusing.. sometimes you can't tell who he's talking to.. if it's Yuna or BEI.. it gets very confusing..

guy??? Can you think of a better script?

guy??? Can you think of a better script?

this lan ming is boring..

I'm cry

Fico curioso para saber sobre o futuro de ingrid, Luan e nora... Eu sinceramente queria que elas duas fossem esposas dele.. Já que gostei bastante das duas..

I feel a certain .. but very strong desire to punch Theo in the face!

Mount lady??? 😏😏😏😏.. Isso liked

one chapter a day is not enough!

please... let it be lea at the door!

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if you improve your writing... it will improve a lot

I would find it interesting for the two dragon queens to become a love interest... it would be nice if it's built well...