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Hey, nice to meet you! So, I love it when a story is dark and humorous, and am open to just about any genre. Unfortunately, I have a horrible addiction to books...
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Just a suggestion: when writing for general audiences, it’s usually best to keep the use of jargon to a minimum. This is because it can distract the reader from the story, make them bored, or possibly cause them to feel that reading the book takes too much brain power. None of these outcomes are desirable; especially for webnovels. In this paragraph, simply stating something along the lines of “blood magic alters the mind and induces amnesia” would have been more effective. However, I understand that such specific word usage may be normalized, and hence, natural to use. If your anything like me, you might even want to use these words to teach your readers or establish a certain feeling. So, if you feel that this information is something that must be shared, or you just really want to share it with your readers, then finding more natural ways to implement them is the best option. For example, a doctor explaining anatomy to a 9 year old, only for the MC to internally state that he already knows this. So, by all means, use whatever jargon you want. Use whatever obscure and crazy words you want! After all, I can’t tell you how to write (and I also happen to love such words). But just remember to use them sparingly. When, writing for general audiences, of course.
Nah, that's the result of abuse my dude. You should probably deal with that sometime.
Correct response. We can neither confirm nor deny if this is, in fact: A) Amon B) Klein disguised as Amon C) A butler invoking PTSD
Can you prove it?
This will not save you from Jia Hyson. Nothing can save you from Jia Hyson.
You have no idea.
Bet, it's the ice spirit she summoned forever ago
I KNEW IT!!! I KNEW ELISE (if that was her name...) WAS IN TROUBLE TOO!!! AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!! AND SARI!! ILL KILL HIM IF SHE DIES! I SWEAR IT! ILL BREAK THE WALL! ILL DO IT!!!
Wait, does Blade Ward protect against all physical damage or just bladed attacks? Or does it require malicious intent to hurt her? Does it consider collateral damage? Basically, is she safe if the ceiling collapses?
Brains beats brawn! Just remember: W.W.B.D! (What Would Batman Do?)
Not-so-fun fact! Places of extreme affluence often, in a way, suck dry their surrounding areas. It’s because of a mixture of policy, politics, and history that an economic divide is created, resulting in “poor” and “rich” neighborhoods/districts. It’s pretty much why every city has some version of a slums area.
Well, that, and the more money available, the more worthless the items you buy it with (in the immediate short term). So for a ver short period of time, you can buy everthing! But, like, once you do, the value of said “everything” will skyrocket to match the money you’ve got! Aka, inflation! So now no one but the people that got gold from Citrinitus can afford anything! Basically, Citrinitus just f*cked THE ENTIRE DRAGON COUNTRY by giving out a ton of gold at all. Expect economic strife and severe starvation in the near future😄
I wonder if his weariness of the other NPC's is partially influenced by his lore? Tabula loves contradictions, and Citrinitus embodies the "fear of the unknown." So, wouldn't it be the ultimate gap moe for him to secretly be an awkward nerd of the occult? A nerd who is so awkward and cute that he wears a mask to hide from others, inadvertently inspiring the same fear he carried upon those he meets? Hah! The man who embodies the fear of the unknown fears the unknown! It's so cute!