Good evening everyone! I would like to invite you to evaluate and comment on this work. I am excited and motivated to try to deliver serious and high-quality content. I am aware of my limitations, but you can be sure that I will do my best.

Ronaldo played for Cruzeiro E.C. as a young man, he only moved to Corinthians at the end of his career. Sorry my dear, I can't do it anymore.

for aerial fights.

This author thinks the same way, Xavier is just a manipulator. Likewise, there is no support from other superheroes for the mutant cause. Magneto with all his mistakes fought for his people. In my opinion the policy of eugenics and thoughtless attacks was a mistake because it scared the human race even more and made Magneto's name dirty. However, creating a mutant nation so that everyone could have a home is simply incredible. With all his mistakes he was a leader.

Спасибо, мой товарищ, новые главы скоро придут.

I am returning now with the chapters. This week there will be news.

there's a hair problem.

Regarding the interval of days before publication, I will take this advice, I believe it can improve the quality of writing.

Honestly, there's more to do than discourage beginning authors due to their grammar. Readers are entitled to writing whatever they want. I don't force anyone to read what I write. If they think it's something they can maintain, great. Otherwise, they go after what is in their respective interest. I'm giving the content in exchange for a little understanding and attention, that's all. There is no time or resources. Regarding the publication, I write in chains, because it is easier for me. If grammar bothers someone, I suggest they just stop reading. Dude, it's a fanfiction site, something for the reader to have fun and me too. Don't take it so seriously and shit rule. This makes anyone want to stop writing for the simple job of having to deal with so many demands. A lot of cool and cool work out there is dismantled because of things like that.

I'm not saying this out of spite for your criticism or something, but because I think reading and writing are a two-way street. I can't have an impeccable result right now, if I'm just starting out. For you to have something impeccable it takes time and money, and for now I only have a little bit of the first one. I believe that throughout the fanfic my writing will improve. As I said earlier, I don't have anyone to pay me for an English course or just be my editor and I'm still a beginner. As a beginner and unpaid for what I'm doing here, I reason when I see good comments or even seeing that I have good views. I say this to you not as a counter-critic, but that for a novice writer it is a bucket of cold water to have to see these demands. Extremely discourages producing work.

This author humbly has a counterpoint to what you said. First I will make clear something that I have not yet fully developed: The MC is a descendant of an ancient race of Mutants, his powers are greater than on the surface, just like Kurt. How the system works? The system manages to reach the potential of its genetics and exploit the hidden powers that a descendant without a system, like Kurt would have extreme difficulty, as is the case of the Shape-Shifting ability. Making the MC have the same potential as his powerful ancestors. As for issues like nomenclature or grammar, I'm sorry, I'm already doing my best. I'm a fan, yes, but I'm doing it just for fun and who knows how to please someone. I am not obliged to deliver something impeccable since English is not my first language. As a matter of fact, I think it is very impolite to demand this, since I don't see anyone paying me an editor or even an English course. I find it much more just that the reader has the goodwill towards me and my content and try to read even with the spelling mistakes or even occasional nomenclature. Even assuming you paid me for an English course for example, who's to say I would have time to edit the text since I need to work. In any case, the reader who is not interested in this is very welcome to simply withdraw, I think it is a very sad culture of the Internet in general to cancel and demote what others do. I am by far an new writer, I do not have social networks and the reason for this is logically wanting to stay away from these demands. Readers are already warned that they can correct or point out spelling change suggestions when they see one. I don't have an editor and that's the most I can do. Anyone who doesn't understand about it or doesn't accept it is welcome to withdraw, or to pay me an editor, of course. Thanks for the feedback in any case.

I don't like a lot of fillers but the next four chapters will be important for the development of the MC and the construction of its relationship with the supporting actors. When there is a 12th chapter , I believe it will be the sentinels' attack on Hammer Bay. Unlike the original, it is not an attack that will completely devastate Genosha, but it will still be important to the plot and will be a massive damage to the history of the mutant race.

Thank you for your support