Why do people always say that? Being kind doesn't mean your naive it just makes you at least decent person.

HIW IS THAT NOT REGULAR!? THATS LIKE 36-60 ACCIDENTS A YEAR!!!

aye yo where's neo at!!??

what the f are u talking about???

I have no clue why this bothers me so much but, boo hoo they looked at you with special eye powers and TRIED to use an illusion on you, if you'd use your head for once you'd see they wouldn't have done anything to harm you and risking animosity with Aphrodite considering she can call upon many of the most powerful beings in the world. sorry it's just for some reason victor sometimes becomes my least favourite character dunno why.

Ok first of all anna(morgana) and Jeanne couldn't talk to their children it they said that when they left the castle(I'm pretty sure anyway) and second, vlad won't harm his children? He killed his son only weeks ago(for them) even though it was kinda deserved and why is Ruby the ONLY one using her brain? so much for all the memories of Adonis a person who had to use his head for almost 2000 years. I love this book but there are alot of things that drive me insane and seem unnecessary to me.

I read marination!!!

I know nothing about warhammer 40k is it really THAT dangerous 😳

I hate when characters get powers they never had in the first place I don't get why people like things like that, it's like in a fanfic where spiderman get Thor's powers among other things like the phoenix force it's weird and unnecessary

HERECY!!!

The only downside to this fanfic for me is that I can't see any of the images for armor or anything that's not star wars related because I can just search it up if it's canon.

When are things going to start picking up I'm getting really bored, and REALLY? Why is serafall always a love interest? She's not interesting She's no awesome or adorable or anything she's just plain annoying with the whole 'magical girl' thing. That was starting to turn into a rant sorry about that.

Oh and I just want to say that I'm not complaining or anything just pointing out something that sometimes bothers me.

"Merciless is not your typical main character who saves the day" What? In my experience 99% of stories and fanfics have main characters who are either evil or an anti hero I can count on one hand main characters who save people just because they want to, or they are so poorly written it unreadable like a superman ff i TRIED to read but the grammar was honestly horrifying and was barely stronger than captain america for half of it.

Please tell me it starts to pick up soon, it's actually starting to get quite boring he doesn't even seem like a vampire no fangs no healing no supernatural strength nothing, other than being immortal and drinking some blood he's almost completely human.

I'm giving a five star for now because I like where this is going but it might change depending on things like the speed of chapter releases and how things develop so good luck

I've given a five star rating even though I haven read a single word yet which is weird but I did it anyway. I just wanted to say it's cool that your mc is a villain but I hope there is a limit to his evil like no killing children or anyone who is truly innocent

I like it so far, my only problem is that the mc and his allies KEEP LOSING!! noy I know he not ment to be op but I can literally count the times he's won on 1 hand and I'm almost at chapter 200

Ok

I'm Australian and I don't even know what a doona is