I am coming back in next week. I had a lot things to learn and ****ed up schedule. I wrote two chapters few days ago and deleted them. I need to reconnect with my thoughts. It's pretty hard to find gap between my two jobs. I work from 10-18 + hour of driving in first job. When I come back... I eat something and sit to work on second job until I decide to time travel to next day.

Recently, I have no time for writing. Busy life. 8 hours in first job and four in second + sleep and attempts of having some personal life.

I thought bigger conspiracy is going on behind the scenes :D

What's wrong with info_thing? Someone, complained about info_dump. Now... Info thing is wrong too. Anything wrong in sense of language or something or just weird preference of readers?

It follows basic rule of economy... It all depends on author's show of 'gratitude' to QI. Luckily, they release quite good novels from time to time. Releasing this novel was basically set in stone, because it didn't leave trial read for months. Voting part is basically useless as well, they added so many safe measures to no let story chosen later to be released earlier that it's basically... Chosen> Added to queue > Released. Only good part about voting is fast passes. Rest is straight 'fair' and 'lawful' China nr.1.

No. They fight and she realizes being check mated... 'She admitted her loss in this duel...' . He exploded her surroundings and she couldn't defend or avoid an attack with spell like Avada Kedavra or another unblockable etc.

I will try to improve on those parts in free time. I have a job and private life too... Thanks for attention. Have a nice day/night.

Fixed. Sorry, I probably meant to write it but I focused on later part of chapter. You know sometimes things happen. I didn't have time to go through published chapters and add all missing transitions between scenes etc. My writing process is pretty chaotic... First, I write draft of chapter and then I expand certain scenes, try to fix grammar... there is not other perspective to see certain mistakes. That's why normally you get proof reader, editor etc... It's fun project, certain things might be bad. I will go through published chapters in free time and improve on those parts. Sorry for inconvenience of being forced proof reader.

I didn't ever say... He will spend 7 years in Hogwarts... I don't keep you here. You can go read other fanfics. Your choice, mate. Have a nice day/night.

Lily? Nothing really happens to her. She will start Hogwarts in half of year with Severus. It's kind of winter break for her sister.

Can you tell me what's the source of this statement? I might missed this in story or my sources. I will rather stay with this version. I mean she was abused by her husband etc. Let her have some peace in her life. I don't really care about canon that much. Author of HP books often uses things for purpose of one event or forgets about them entirely in story. If you want to know more just check 'plot holes in harry potter' in google.

It's not traceable... Harry surroundings are traceable... Entire trace thing is kind of bullshit. It is used for plot armor... I read entire article that it's not consistent etc.

Thanks for reminder. You are not first person to point out my problem. I do scene transitions poorly or I forgot about them completely. I will work on them... Try to go through previous chapters to add missing sentences... I am really sorry. I am learning proper writing... so there is a lot things that aren't working yet or are just simply nonexistent... I am happy that people point those things. As I can understand my own weaknesses and work on them. I feel really strange to not encounter any toxic personality under my novel... At least not yet... Have a nice day/night. Don't expect changes to fast as I work on my real job right now. Ocassionaly, answering comments from phone.

I will work on this aspect on my writing. Sometimes, I forgot that it's very important part of writing. Currently...I am little busy and my time for hobby is limited. I even work in this moment to create some free time in next week. I am sorry if quality of story disappoints you. I decided to write fanfic to have improve writing. Thanks for pointing this problem out. In free time, I will work on this aspect as its very important for reading experience.

It will be story about Snape and magic. In my opinion, limiting wizarding world to only Hogwarts/ Britain is pointless. There is a lot fanfics here on WN... I am not even talking about other sites. There might be Snape fic of your taste. Good luck in finding something fun. Thanks for reading until this point.

No exactly... It's possible to awake magic with genetics. Magic is something between... Let's say everything will be clarified in later of the story.

Ahh. You are right. One sentence could actually solve all of this. I didn't even discover one of my sentences ended with comma. I will try to improve scene transition...

I apologize if I sounded rude or something. I misunderstood first comment and tried to explain story.

Random experiment of strong entity.